Ixi - Ghostly Bard

[Aaron]

Here's my humble attempt:

Ixi

I tried to add a little lighthearted mystery at the end there. Let me know what you guys think

[Troy_Costisick]

That's actually really good! +1

[Lintking]

Hehe...she's fantastic. +1.

[Aaron]

Thank you, thank you

[Lintking]

Although I think that last sentence,

Whatever it was that was the right cause was last time...

... has one too many "was"s in it - could be either the second or third, but one of those is definitely extra.

[Aaron]

I have removed a "was"

[zdsdead]

I like this

[Chilingsworth]

This gets a +1 from me.

Though I've noticed that most of the ideas that are still around seem to be great ones.

[Aaron]

Yea, there are a lot of really good ideas hanging around here