Here's my humble attempt:
I tried to add a little lighthearted mystery at the end there. Let me know what you guys think
That's actually really good! +1
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Hehe...she's fantastic. +1.
Thank you, thank you
Although I think that last sentence,... has one too many "was"s in it - could be either the second or third, but one of those is definitely extra.Whatever it was that was the right cause was last time...
I have removed a "was"
I like this
Elder Dragon, Grand Chancellor x 2, Conjurer x 2, and some other type of Backer
This gets a +1 from me.
Though I've noticed that most of the ideas that are still around seem to be great ones.
Yea, there are a lot of really good ideas hanging around here